1. Title
2. Start with an interesting beginning sentence
3. Use adjectives to describe our special place
4. Write about why it's our special place
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Lollipop's Playland
By Sam
Lollipop's Playland has spinning things and they are fun.
And it smells like chocolate.
And it is fun because you can play with whatever you want.
Lollipop's PLayland is fun and it has a big ball pit.
The Zoo
By Kai-Matthew
My Favorite thing is to go to the Zoo.
The Zoo is so fun and good and good and good! And it has zebras and
tigers and lions.
My Cousin's House
By Angus
Their house is really big. They have two pigs and one dog. And one cat. And five or four Chicks. I have to sleep in my cousin's room. He is fourteen and my other cousin is twelve. It sounds like chicks. It smells like a pig's pen. It is hot and it is fun because I get to jump into their pool and then I will swim back to the other side of the pool. And I like feeding the chicks and the pigs. Then I go and swing on the swing and then I go and have a rest and then I wake up. Then I go watch tv then I go and play and then I go to sleep.
By Sam
Lollipop's Playland has spinning things and they are fun.
And it smells like chocolate.
And it is fun because you can play with whatever you want.
Lollipop's PLayland is fun and it has a big ball pit.
The Zoo
By Kai-Matthew
My Favorite thing is to go to the Zoo.
The Zoo is so fun and good and good and good! And it has zebras and
tigers and lions.
My Cousin's House
By Angus
Their house is really big. They have two pigs and one dog. And one cat. And five or four Chicks. I have to sleep in my cousin's room. He is fourteen and my other cousin is twelve. It sounds like chicks. It smells like a pig's pen. It is hot and it is fun because I get to jump into their pool and then I will swim back to the other side of the pool. And I like feeding the chicks and the pigs. Then I go and swing on the swing and then I go and have a rest and then I wake up. Then I go watch tv then I go and play and then I go to sleep.
